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1. Expand the noun.
1.You can expand a noun by inserting a relative clause.
Examples:
The terrorists were afraid.
→ The terrorists “who were surrounded” were afraid.
There’s the man.
→ There’s the man “that married the woman”.
→ There’s the man that married the woman “who hated him”.
2. If the relative clause has a progressive (continuing) aspect or passive voice, you can reduce the clause into a simple phrase.
Examples:
Look at the boy “who is studying Calculus”.
→ Look at the boy “studying Calculus”.
The man “who was threatened by drug dealers” is now gone.
→ The man “threatened by drug dealers” is now gone.
3. When a noun phrase is the object of its relative clause, you can reduce the relative clause.
Examples:
They had a problem “that they couldn’t solve” yesterday.
→ They had a problem “they couldn’t solve” yesterday.
She cared about the man “whom she couldn’t help”.
→ She cared about the man “she couldn’t help.”
2. Replace the noun.
1.You can replace a noun with a noun clause.
Example:
The biologist believed “the theory of natural selection”.
→ The biologist believed “that most of the traits organisms have withstood countless natural pressures, generation after generation, to survive to this day”.
2.You can replace a noun with a gerund.
Example:
The group started “their exercise”.
→ The group started “jogging”.
3. You can replace a noun with an infinitive.
Example:
He wanted “this” more than anything else.
→ He wanted “to succeed” more than anything else.
Noun phrases are the objects in your writing. Make them interesting.
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